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Goddess on the Last Train

Fiona Mackintosh

Jun 4, 2011

Goddess on the Last Train


I want to be the goddess on that train.


Such lush, bountiful, languid disregard.

Such casual ease, resolved indifference.

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The architecture of cloth does not bind her

but spills her softly rounded flesh,

stretched out, in confident display.

A lioness,

sated after feeding.

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I want to be the goddess on that train.

No constraints, of place or time.

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Such indolent, sprawled, reclining attitude,

such unself-conscious grace.

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Commanding the body she inhabits.

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Content in its animal softness.

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Goddess radiates power.


Stretches arms, cross behind.

Arches back, flesh revealed.

Releases arch, flesh concealed.

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My Lady of Travellers,

My Bohemian Queen.

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Cascading mane of rich brunette,

tossed over shoulders, casually exposed.

Sun-kissed freckles on creamy canvas

tempts the eye,

downward,

following curves.

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Goddess sandals sparkling, gold,

in the neon light of the train's harsh glare,

bouncing, slowly, on confidently crossed knee.

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And the man who stands before her

in his navy three-piece suit,

as he tells her of a Jewish miracle,

that I no longer remember;

only that the tale involved war,

as it so often does,

and abandoned farms.

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His eyes averted, awkward.

For to look upon the Holy of Holies,

is to be blinded.​

A man cannot look upon a goddess,

and be unchanged.


Then she tells him, in dismissive tones:

"You and I could not be more different,"

as she gazes past him,

into the evening warmth.


Fiona Mackintosh (© June 4, 2011)

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